1. Replacing words
On Saturday, I went to the mall. Compared to. On Saturday I went to the Hub Hornby.
In a week I will be going on holiday. Compared to. In a week I will be going to Bali.
On Saturday, I sold my old house. Compared to. On Saturday, I sold my worn down house.
2. Similes, Metaphor
The room was as dark as a pair of black jeans.
The girl was as fast as a cheetah chasing food.
Mary's voice is music to my ears.
3. Onomatopoeia and Alteration
Billy Bounced Balls down the Building.
He crashed his car and it went BANG!
4. The 5 senses
Jayne smelt something that smelled delicious.
They heard a giant sleigh coming towards them.
Jayne then said “It tastes like heaven, just the way it was marinated”
5. Inserting words. E.g (The police car went past)
The red, white and blue police car went past
The red, white and blue police car went loudly past
The red, white and blue police car went past extremely fast
6. Deleting words. E.g (The young boy, with long black hair, went over to the shops)
The young boy, with long black hair, went over to the shops. To. The young boy, went over to the shops.
Good work, Kayne :)
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