Advert Sentence
Example: Quickly,Curiously, Importantly, Firstly, Often, Remarkable, Similarly, Surprisingly, Readily, Significantly.
*Comma goes after the adverb
E.g Surprisingly, Mrs Handley was on time to class.
1. Firstly, Isaac decided to come to class.
2. Surprisingly, He made the layup.
3. Remarkably, Everyone dies in the end.
Begin with a preposition
Preposition are words the indicate movement or position\
Example: Aganist, Behind, Above
E.g Within the hour, all students had finished their essays.
1. Prior to the bell, I was already in class.
2. Throughtout the house, I found what i wanted.
Basic Body Paragraph
Point: State the point you wish to make
Evidence: 2-3 sentances that give you evidence to your point
Explain: 3-4 sentances that explain your evidence in relation to your point
Link: Back to your point 1-2 sentances
To the next paragraph- 1 sentance
Point: Everyone knows its better to read the book than watch the movie.
Evidence: For example, the movie made of Wonder is very different from the book, the movie they left out lots of imformation. In the book the Main teacher is female but in the movie the teacher is a male. Also the camp incident missed out the info about Auggies hearing aide.
Explain: This incident made more sence in the book because he was bullied for having his "lobo ears" which made him look different. It didn't make sence to bully him in the movie without them.
Link: For those reasons, the book was clearly better than the movie. However, you can enjoy The movie without reading the book.
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